Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
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people
argue that it is important to keep your house and workplace clean with organised Use synonyms
space
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this
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,
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apply
helps
you with work or study.
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help
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people
really need to organise their Use synonyms
space
correctly, because it helps to work or study quicker than when it is Use synonyms
mess
around you. There is an Correct article usage
a mess
argue
that if Replace the word
argument
home
is clean, Add an article
the home
a home
mind
will be clean too. Add an article
the mind
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are some
people
for whom easier to have a lot of things not in their places. Use synonyms
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dependents
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depends
of
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on
human’s
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human
profession
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professions
:
arts or chiefs. Remove the comma
apply
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Nevertheless
when the workplace is tidy, Add a comma
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people
do not spend a lot of time Use synonyms
to find
their stuff. For students it will be better, Change the verb form
finding
as a result
of Linking Words
clean
mind, they would remember more information than with the mess in their Correct article usage
a clean
space
.
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However
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tidy
home has Correct article usage
a tidy
big
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a big
affect
on Replace the word
effect
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the human’s
human’s
mind and health. Change noun form
human
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example
if Add a comma
,example
man
has a lot of dust in his flat, it will be harmful Add an article
a man
the man
for
his body. Change the preposition
to
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Moreover
it can cause Add a comma
,Moreover
disease
like cancer or tuberculosis. Change the noun form
diseases
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Likewise
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,Likewise
human
can catch an infection, and transfer Fix the agreement mistake
humans
to
other Correct pronoun usage
it to
people
. Use synonyms
This
way epidemics and pandemics appear. Linking Words
In
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addition
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,addition
people
who prefer to live Use synonyms
healthy
, Change the word
healthily
firstly
need to clean their own Linking Words
space
and Use synonyms
secondly
clean all their stuff, like pens or mobile Linking Words
phone
. Especially Fix the agreement mistake
phones
observe
hygiene Wrong verb form
observing
public
places to secure humans health
In Change preposition
in public
conclusion
I can say that it is really important to have Add a comma
,conclusion
clean
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a clean
space
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,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
for your health.Linking Words
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