The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter, say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party explain why you won’t be able to attend the party give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, Thank you for your kind invitation to Chris's

birthday

party

. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I can't make it

this

time. Chris has always been a dear friend to me. Since childhood, we liked each other's company and have celebrated several birthdays together. He enjoys

birthday

surprises and will cherish every moment of

that

Correct pronoun usage

them

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. I still remember, during our college time, we planned a pool

party

for him at the MGM grand hotel in Brisbane and he was extremely happy. So, I feel he will love your idea about celebrating his

birthday

on a yacht. Unfortunately, I have an important meeting on the same day in Singapore and

as a result

, I cannot attend

this

party

. I really wanted to come and surprise him with his favourite chocolate but due to

this

meeting, I had to cancel my flight tickets.

However

, I was planning to come over during the Christmas holidays and I would really appreciate it if you could keep it a secret. I was planning to take him on a cruise for his

post

Add a hyphen

post-birthday

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birthday

celebration. I hope you guys have fun and give my love to Chris. I can't wait to see photos of

this

surprise

party

. Yours Sincerely, Vimal Thakkar

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2Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

214 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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