The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter, say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party explain why you won’t be able to attend the party give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, Thank you for your kind invitation to Chris's

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party

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. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I can't make it

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time. Chris has always been a dear friend to me. Since childhood, we liked each other's company and have celebrated several birthdays together. He enjoys

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surprises and will cherish every moment of

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. I still remember, during our college time, we planned a pool

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for him at the MGM grand hotel in Brisbane and he was extremely happy. So, I feel he will love your idea about celebrating his

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on a yacht. Unfortunately, I have an important meeting on the same day in Singapore and

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, I cannot attend

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party

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. I really wanted to come and surprise him with his favourite chocolate but due to

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meeting, I had to cancel my flight tickets.

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, I was planning to come over during the Christmas holidays and I would really appreciate it if you could keep it a secret. I was planning to take him on a cruise for his

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celebration. I hope you guys have fun and give my love to Chris. I can't wait to see photos of

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surprise

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. Yours Sincerely, Vimal Thakkar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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