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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#anyone #post #information #internet
It is true that the internet allows anyone to share
information
 online. But I completely disagree that
this
 increases the accuracy of released
information
. Most
information
 we read
are
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 posted after the automatic surveillance system of social platform.
Although
 we can directly see our publishments or messages, others except our friends won't get the
relased
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related
released
information
 as long as
that
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most social media
platform
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 have algorithms to limit the spreading range with sensitive words. What's worse, our opening links according to the title with preference decides that following
information
 with similar judgement or
exactly
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 opinions on the same sides are recommended to us. In other word, internet algorithms of recommendation
facilitates
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 our
unsubconsious
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subconscious
 judgement and
subsequently
 determines that most of
information
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 we read is barely accurate. Immediate
information
 does not
equal
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to
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accurate
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. Every post
information
 only can show one perspective of
a
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 event, not to mention few people can leave objective effects behind. Even though most released fragments of
a
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 same event are
rsubjective
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subjective
, it still requires good abilities like logical thinking and preclusion to reasonably compose original events with high accuracy. In my opinion,
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 disagree that most of
information
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 we read on the internet is accurate
although
 posting
information
 online is free for anyone.
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