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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis

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Walking is the best way for to
people
gets
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 rid of many health problems. Walking is affect
people
's health in many ways. In my opinion, I believe the advantages of walking outweigh the drawback.
However
, in
this
 essay I will discuss the
reasons
 of
people
 do not walk today and ,
finally
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 I will propose to good encourage
people
 about walking.
On the other hand
, critics may point out that, one of the most significant drawbacks of less walking is the increase in some health problems.
Such
 as, chorostoal, diabetics and
also
people
 become fat. Because they get less exercise for their body. There are more
reasons
 for
people
 didn't like to walk. The most preponderant one is that the school, working place, shops and hospitals are situated in long distance from their homes.
Furthermore
, a huge amount of
people
is
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 using vehicles. For that ,reason peoples use their own vehicles to go
a short distances
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.
For example
, the newspaper Australia mentioned that vehicle users increased and
also
the
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predictions decreased in the modern world.
On the other hand
, nowadays
people
 are used to a very busy life. So they went to work early in the morning and come back home in the evening.
Hence
, they spend a very tiring lifestyle. For
this
reason
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people
 do not like to walk.
Therefore
, peoples use vehicles to travel. There are so many solutions
for
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 the above-mentioned problems. The
first
 solution is we can build the shops, schools, hospitals and shopping centres and
also
 park within walking distance.
Secondly
, we can create a park with walking lines. It encourages
people
 to walk even they have leisure time.
Finally
, we can telecast the advertisement about the benefits of walking. In my own opinion, I think walking is a good habit
to
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people
 to do their leadirevtime. Nowadays
peoples
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people
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 do not like to walk for many
reasons
. But we can provide a good solution for those
reasons
.
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