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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,  -Explain why you think he/she would enjoy a camping holiday -Describe some possible disadvantages -Say whether you would like to go camping with him/her

#friend #holiday #first #time #summer #-explain #-describe #-say
Dear Sheida , How are things? I hope
this
 finds you well.I am writing
this
 letter with regard to
last
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 email you wrote about your camping holiday.
First
 of all , I would like to tell you some of my experience with camping.
However
 , there were some problems
such
 as bug bites and a long queue for a toilet but it was the best trip I have ever gone on with a tour .
Firstly
 , you will go to a small village on the top of a hill inside of the jungles and you will stay in a tent
thus
 you may have a great view of nature with fresh air . Apart from all of them , please check the weather before your trip it is a rainy area and sometimes there is unpredictable rain
therefore
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, it might be difficult to stay in a camp .
Moreover
 , as I have known about your allergies to some insects please watch out for giving insect repellent . If you have more questions, please do not hesitate and write back to me . Love, Neda
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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