Prison is the common way most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide the public a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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is more useful than sentencing criminals

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opinion. There are a variety of reasons why

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proportion of educated citizens can effectively reduce

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of crimes. One reason is that educated people know the danger of

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and its consequences as they are taught to residents by many

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groups. As a

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, they will not tend to commit a

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due to the punishments of the authority

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as prison

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. Another important reason is that in areas that have many educated inhabitants, the

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of unemployed people is low which

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the rate of wrongdoings.

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, in big cities

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as Tokyo, almost residents have proper jobs

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of criminals each year

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lower than the average of the world. Apart from the

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benefits expressed above, I believe that prison is not a good way to reduce the

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of crimes.

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, prisoners won't have good conditions in prison, which makes it harder for them to change their attitudes towards the community.

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, many prisoners in Vietnam still carry out wrongdoings after their sentences due to

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of education in prisons.

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, teaching people when they were young is much more effective as many youths haven't had bad intentions

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the public.

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, many of them will have great attitudes when they get older, which

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the

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of crimes. In conclusion, I believe that educating the community to solve the problem of

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is much better than prisoning criminals

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. It is recommended that the government should fully

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its citizens.