Using computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that there are more disadvantages in comparison to advantages for juveniles in using
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influence
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, due to the excessive use of electronic devices large percentage of kids between the age of 4 to 12 years are suffering from weak eyesight. Linking Words
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, they become internet addicted and cannot survive without it, Linking Words
that
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create
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creates
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, youngsters have no physical activity because of online gaming and virtual socialization with others which is the cause of many health issues Linking Words
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teenagers. Change preposition
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Pakistan
health department has reported Correct article usage
the Pakistan
20
% increase in the backbone diseases of youngsters due to the over usage of Correct article usage
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the
laptops and other devices.
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On the contrary
, the benefits of using automatic devices will be presented now. Linking Words
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of
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allowed students to bring their electronic gadgets with them because they get homework electronically.
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