Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?

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spectators become uncontrol nowadays cannot be overlooked. Some

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and effects regarding

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Football

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The football

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is one of the most popular

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competitions around the world. Every

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team

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has their own loyal community who will always support them in every

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.

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, an act of

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towards other

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team's

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supporter

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become more aggressive. There are some

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related to

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, when people admire something or someone too much, they tend to cannot

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their ego when it comes to

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their idol.

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, if someone

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a big fan of one of the

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's player, he/she may

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all the money that he/she has to buy

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very expensive merchandise. The same thing goes

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team

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supporters

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,

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game

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often included emotions. When there is a small mistake happens during the

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causes

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anger both for the players and the spectators.

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violent behaviour from

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supporters

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Violent

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has never been a good thing,

those kind

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that kind

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of bad

reponse

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responses

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negative impacts.

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of all, bullying others can cause injuries,

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worst, it can take someone's life. To illustrate, the

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tragedy at Kanjuruhan Stadium take more than 100 people's life

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both

supporters

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againts

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each other. People who only want to enjoy the

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become the victims.

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,

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violently at the stadium will ruin the facilities.

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losing

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lots of money to repair the broken facilities. In conclusion, most

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bullying

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the bullying

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cases in a

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causes

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by uncontrol

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from

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supporters

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, all these bad habits will give negative impacts

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the innocents and

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the

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footbal

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football

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