Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?

The bad news of how

football

spectators become uncontrol nowadays cannot be overlooked. Some

causes

and effects regarding

this

will

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Football

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The football

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game

is one of the most popular

sport

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competitions around the world. Every

football

team

has their own loyal community who will always support them in every

games

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game

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.

However

, an act of

violent

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violence

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towards other

football

team's

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team

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supporter

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supporters

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become more aggressive. There are some

causes

related to

this

.

Firstly

, when people admire something or someone too much, they tend to cannot

control

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their ego when it comes to

protect

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their idol.

For example

, if someone

become

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a big fan of one of the

football

team

's player, he/she may

spent

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all the money that he/she has to buy

a

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very expensive merchandise. The same thing goes

to

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the

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football

team

supporters

.

Moreover

,

football

game

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games

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often included emotions. When there is a small mistake happens during the

game

, it may

causes

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anger both for the players and the spectators.

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,

this

may

causes

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cause

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of

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violent behaviour from

football

supporters

.

Violent

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has never been a good thing,

those kind

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that kind

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of bad

reponse

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responses

have

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negative impacts.

First

of all, bullying others can cause injuries,

even

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and even

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worst, it can take someone's life. To illustrate, the

last

tragedy at Kanjuruhan Stadium take more than 100 people's life

because

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ofbecause

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both

supporters

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were againts

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againts

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against

each other. People who only want to enjoy the

game

become the victims.

Secondly

,

behave

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violently at the stadium will ruin the facilities.

This

will

losing

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lose

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lots of money to repair the broken facilities. In conclusion, most

of

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bullying

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the bullying

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cases in a

football

game

causes

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cause

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by uncontrol

emotion

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emotions

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from

the

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supporters

.

Furthermore

, all these bad habits will give negative impacts

for

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on

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the innocents and

also

the

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footbal

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football

facilities

itself

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.