some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school, Do the advantages of this outweight disadvantages.

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some people reckon that it's better to learn it in secondary

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time efficiency dominate. According to numerous

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experiences, children have open minds to learn whatever

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is being told to them

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lessons or a foreign

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many toddlers will learn a

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it's a lot easier for tutors to teach them when they are younger. And that can leads to them

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in a more

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way without any pressure or hard work.

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might be really sophisticated to put it in

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secondary

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student has more leisure time than an older student.

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students, they said that they

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had more time for playing video games when they were

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the previous level. So it can be replaced with some

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some people might say it's an overpressure for primary students to put an extra course on their syllabus but because of the smooth learning process

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it seems to be a better decision to start their learning progress from primary

school

.