Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person’s knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student’s own country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There appears to be a different belief about studying abroad some people think it is important especially in gaining a wider perspective of the
world
, while others state that our own country
can provide the education that aligns with career
here. Both conditions are equally good and depend on the major that Add an article
a career
students
are going to take.
To begin
with, going overseas for education is beneficial to improve students
' skills both in social and development. Firstly
, it brings the students
to a bigger community with various backgrounds thus
leading to better
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a better
human
being around the Add an article
the human
a human
world
. Another benefit is the opportunity to benchmark the development from another country
that the students
can apply to their land. For instance
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such
as Japan, students
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behaviours
also
how the country
succeeded in mobilization.
Nevertheless
, studying at home is not worse than the other one since there are certain majors that are better learned in the home country
. Medicine is one of those majors because each country
has a different health issue and can not be treated similarly
due to many factors. Moreover
, with the developed technology, students
can actually get a similar curriculum as international students
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country
. The drawback is yet still there such
as it affects the student's point of view toward the world
which tends to be smaller than those going overseas.
In conclusion, each condition has its own benefits and drawbacks but I agree with the importance to study abroad since a wider knowledge of the world
is one of the main skills required for a future career or even business.Submitted by hpanduhimawan on
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