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Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family includimg uncles, aunts and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents. To what extend are you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes believed that taking
care
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 of
kids
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 by the whole family is better than only by
parents
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. While it is true that looking after
children
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 by many
members
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 of the family is good, I believe that letting only
parents
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 bring up their offspring is more effective. On the one hand, there are several reasons why allowing relatives to take
care
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 of
children
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 is good for them. One reason is that the
kids
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 will have some relatives looking after them if their
parents
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 are busy.
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, the
children
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 will grow up very well due to many help of their family
members
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. Another reason is each member of the family usually has a unique strength, which is formed because of their own practice.
This
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 advantage will contribute great help to the kid.
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, almost every extended families in Vietnam have their offspring growing up perfectly with many talents in many aspects
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 as sports.
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, it seems to me that
children
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 are taken
care
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 of better by only
parents
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 than by the whole family.
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, being helped by many family
members
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 will lessen the
kids
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' love for their
parents
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 since youngsters aren't looked after by their
parents
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 much. If
children
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 don't love their
parents
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, they may not obey the advice of their mom and dad in the future.
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, usually taking
care
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 of offspring will increase the knowledge of adults about their
kids
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, which is formed while
parents
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 look after them.
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, many
parents
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 in my country easily allow their
children
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 to do their own choice
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 of prohibiting them as they believe and understand
kids
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' personalities. In conclusion,
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 being looked after by many family
members
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 is advantageous for the
children
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 in some aspects, I believe that it is better to let
parents
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 grow up their
children
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 on their own. It is recommended that adults should
care
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 more about their offspring.
Submitted by tienduongftu on

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