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Because the modern technology, it is no longer necessary to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both and give your opinion based on your experience.

#technology #skill
In
this
 modern ,era every
skill
 replaces by smart technologies. There are split opinions regarding writing skills. Some believe that now learning handwriting ability is not more important, whereas another group of thinker support writing skills in any condition.
However
, both have their own pons and cons.
Therefore
, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed. Examining the former opinion, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is writing is not a necessary
skill
 nowadays and in future
also
.
This
 is because every hand
work
 converts into machinery
work
 in
this
 technological era.
For example
, one decade ago students did homework in notes and in these days they complete lessons on computers, laptops and tablets.
In addition
, they
also
 believe that people do smart
work
 with new components rather than follow old traditions because they
work
 easily without any hard
work
 and burden
work
 completed in less time.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that writing is an important
skill
 for everyone and it is not a negligible point because if a person is not write anything about their
work
 on gadgets they lost their writing
skill
 and cognitive
skill
also
.
Besides
this
, new smart gadgets correct spelling mistake themselves and get suggestion so people don't think more and don't realise mistakes. In ,fact time students copy the whole homework from google.
Thus
 to conclude and give my opinion. I would say that any
skill
 is important for everyone because some skills feel proud of that person and follow the tradition of modern technology youngsters lost their culture and depend on computers is the most ideal deal with
this
 situation. In the big picture, writing is a more important thing in daily life, for ,instance if you write a letter by hand to anyone is more important rather than printing cards it feels like a hand-to-heart.
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