In many parts of world there is continuos coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.
Elderly
people
are not respected enough in some nations nowadays, which can cause certain problems. In this
essay the possible reason for lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
respect
towards the preceding generation is discussed, some
follow-up problems are indicated.
Speaking about the probable background that has led to the situation, where a younger generation does not look up to their grandparents, it is necessary to mention Correct word choice
and some
growing
oversimplification of the mindset. Having taken up the educational function some easy pleasures, clip thinking, Correct article usage
the growing
social
media networking websites have turned the core social values upside down, including family hierarchy. Take Correct word choice
and social
for instance
contemporary Russia, a country with strong traditions, where a grandfather used to be the head of the family and a role model. Unfortunately, today’s Russian teenagers tend to occasionally allow themselves arrogant and rude behavior
towards their grandparents and in public places. In Change the spelling
behaviour
such
a way, change
of values may be the reason why the young do not Correct article usage
a change
respect
the old at times.
Considering the fact that structure has always been one of the most essential principals
in society, it can be concluded that Correct your spelling
principles
nNeglecting
ideas, interests and Correct your spelling
neglecting
experience
of older generations might!!! lead to dramatic consequences. Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
Firstly
, once respect
to
our grandparents is lost, we are likely to repeat mistakes already made years ago. Change preposition
for
Secondly
, old people
are very precious because without them significant traditions and customs might be easily vanished
Change to the active voice
easily vanish
have easily vanished
??
forgotten. Change the punctuation
.
Finally
, only as long as we count(??учитываем/считаемся) others despite/repardless
/not depending on??? their age, social status, or race or gender, only Correct your spelling
regardless
then
we can be called ‘human beings’. These three problems might be encountered if we continue losing respect
towards older people
.
To conclude, all of us must be respectful enough to older people
both to keep our society functioning properly and to remain humans
. As Newton said once, ‘we cannot see far enough without standing on the shoulders of our ancestors’.Fix the agreement mistake
human
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