You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter

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Dear Mr Jone, I am a tenant who is currently living in you are apartment No 222 Lily Avenue . I have been here since

last

April. I am witting

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this

letter to inform you that fixing some damaged

furnitures

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furniture

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pieces of furniture

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However

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we are extremely

enjoing

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enjoying

at you are morden house but we concern there are few things need to be maintenance immediately.

Firstly

, here dining table one leg is not stable and always

swing

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while we having meals.

Secondly

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one window could not shut properly

might

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need

replace

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the lock.

furthermore

, when we turn on

air

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the air

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condition

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conditioning

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its

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make

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makes

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so noisy and difficult to sleep

over night

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overnight

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Rest

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of the facilities were so good. I would

reqest

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request

you to visit our property and observe

this

matter quickly and send one engineer to our property fix

this items

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this item

these items

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and need to replace

aircondition

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air condition

as well. It would

great

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be great

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help if you could resolve

this

problem as soon as

posible

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possible

. Yours faithfully, Sam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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