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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, many
countries
 have been trying to develop advanced items to solve the lack of
food
 in the
world
 by the way why many people around the
world
 still go hungry. In my opinion, I think “Capitalism”. Under “the
world
 order” by the USA in 1970 (the cold war) divide the
countries
 around the
world
into
Add a missing verb
were into
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 3 groups, 1) the
first
world
 was like the USA, UK, and Japan like that, 2) the
second
world
 was like the Soviet Union and 3) the
third
 word was a developing country. I didn’t think capitalism is bad. I think it made many problems
such
 as the lack of
food
 in poor
countries
. According to economics, developed
countries
 have an absolute right to take advantage of the resource in the developing
countries
 with the lowest wage, the hardest work and the most dangerous place
working
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Hence
, the people who live in developing
countries
 has no opportunities to mobilisation their status. The lowest wage they get and vice versa the high price of their item product
for example
 1 dollar US per day for 1 worker in developed
countries
, but 100 dollars US per the item product to be sealed, the cap is approximately 99 dollars US goes to the owner who lives in the developed
countries
. The solve
this
 problem, I think the government in each country should guarantee their citizen
have
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 basic rights,
food
, clean water and education,
for example
. The highest price of
food
resize
Correct subject-verb agreement
resizes
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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poor people to access
food
, so the government need to bare the barrier price of
food
 won’t be high.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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