In spite of the advances made in agricluture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Even , the mass production of

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grains over the world limits a poor family to

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a basic meals

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every day. There are several factors which lead to

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problem. In my ,opinion the biggest challenge is

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wastage, inappropriate consumption and the increasing population every year around the globe.

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with, people are not aware of

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consumption every year and

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lead to wastage.

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, during covid mostly individuals stored plenty of grains, and vegetables and

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led to black marketing leaving the poor crowds with no

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, storage issues in India due to hot temperatures most of the dairy products are rotten.

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, during weddings and mass ,gathering plenty of

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is thrown away if not used.

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, there are several ways to curb

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situation, An Individual should distribute the leftovers to the people living nearby with no roof over their

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, if there is a construction site nearby individuals should help labour with extra available in their houses.

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, the government should provide more schemes to the poor so that they can afford

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at least twice a day.

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, Rashan cardholders can avail of rice, and flour at very nominal rates as compared to normal market prices. What is most important, is providing free condoms to households every month to reduce the birth rates and will help control the birth rate. To conclude,

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measures taken will help balance the

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scarcity in our country, Underprivileged community can visit gurudwaras as they provide free

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to all and will help them fulfil their basic hunger. More and more

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steps will help the world.

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Topic Vocabulary:

food scarcity
malnutrition
sustainable agriculture
distribution networks
food insecurity
subsistence farming
agricultural yield
food deserts
infrastructural development
economic disparity
global supply chain
food sovereignty
climate resilience
political unrest
post-harvest loss

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