You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my concern relating to our college cafeteria which is located between the library and the main building.
I always have my lunch there because it has a variety of dishes whereas others cannot available. I enjoy the Italian cuisine in Linking Words
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place because I can feel the authentic taste. The price is Linking Words
also
quite reasonable for the students and we can Linking Words
also
obtain some discount if we can present our student ID card.
Unfortunately, the lighting system in Linking Words
this
place is not sufficient and I cannot read properly inside the cafe.Many students are willing to study if the lighting system is well enough .
I would like to suggest the lighting system should replace with the new one Linking Words
instead
of upgrading the existing one because the cost can be the same. Linking Words
However
, the new lighting can be used for a long time .
I hope you may consider my suggestion and improve the facilities Linking Words
accordingly
.
Yours faithfully,
ThomasLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite