Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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cutting-edge era public face a lot of health risks and diseases behind
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situation some
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say that government should focus more on reducing environmental
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and household
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. In my point of view , there are other factors that
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affect
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's health. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will precise more and
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conclusion to
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with,
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face more
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due to bad environmental conditions that lead
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health disasters
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as flu, cough, heart problem,
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and stress
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among all ages
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even small children as well suffer from the disease. Governments have the responsibility to take care of their citizen and provide them
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environment. Apart from
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authority, it should make rules and low for those who harm
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and pollute it. What is more? note only the environment but
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housing is one of the other concerning issue
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have no clean water in their homes more ever they have not much space for leaving that
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in engenders. To be more precise, there are some other factors as well; stress levels in
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folks
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increase due to their unorganised nature and lack of sleep during the night and more frequent usage of phone and computer systems. Apparently, all citizens faced cutthroat competition from their counterparts
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their struggles and difficulties
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increased day by day.
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, being unemployed they face difficulties for their survival and unemployment
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leads
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to poverty
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among young
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they feel inferior. Adding more information,
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's lifestyles are known more flexible so they
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not much time for exercise
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lead
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illnesses
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to illnesses
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as obesity. To sum up, not only environmental and housing
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in
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's lives but there are other reasons as well governments should focus on all these factors properly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental pollution
  • Public health
  • Respiratory diseases
  • Cardiovascular conditions
  • Infectious diseases
  • Mental health problems
  • Government intervention
  • Industrial emissions
  • Clean energy sources
  • Public housing policies
  • Safe and affordable housing
  • Environmental hazards
  • Green public spaces
  • Community well-being
  • Physical inactivity
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