You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: • the type of accommodation you wish to find • some details about yourself • any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

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is to request you to provide reliable accommodation at Kaveri block near the auditorium. So that It will take 20 minutes to reach my department on campus. I am looking for a dual-share type of accommodation. As it is more convenient to study at night time. The other student should be of the same branch so that we can combine studies which are beneficial to both of us. Now coming to the room I feel more comfortable with the attached bathroom and cupboards along with internet availability. I was selected to join a post-graduate 2years course on the IIT campus, but based on my interest I chose a 1-year course at kukatpally. I have completed my undergrad at Annamacharya institute Tirupati autonomous colleges. I am currently living in Hyderabad with my relatives, but my Native is Nellore in Andhra Pradesh state. I would like to request you for food services. I am currently following a strict diet plan to achieve my goal of losing 5 kgs in 6 months. It would be nice to have two boiled eggs in the morning and paneer curry with brown rice. And a cup of milk before going to bed. I

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require a few items to purchase. Could you suggest any grocery store near the campus? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Vivek

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