Question. You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to Mr Koto, the manager. In your letter: Explain who you are Describe the problem exactly Make suggestions to improve the gym

Dear Mr. Koto, My name is Ashun Patel

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I have recently joined your gym with a prime membership that includes a personal trainer for six months. I am writing

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letter to raise a concern regarding the unhygienic environment of the gymnasium. On the very first day of my joining, I exercised for one and a half hours, where I had to clean all the equipment prior to use. As

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I instructed my personal trainer regarding the problem I faced,

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it was not resolved in the same week.

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found the used towels on the bench of the changing room , which I have never seen previously in any of the gyms in which I have been a member. I would like to recommend that

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management should personally put some notice on the wall at a distinct distance or on the machines stating

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to wipe them out after use. Within that, the trainers as well must be strict in informing the members, in order to maintain cleanliness. I hope you understand the problem and take possible considerations as soon as possible. Thank you for your support and time. Yours faithfully, Ashun Patel