Some people argue that internet-based lectures is better type of lectures. The other tend to believe that university-based lecture is still needed. Explain both side of the view and give your opinion.

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some people that online lectures are the best type of learning,

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others think that traditional university lessons are better.Both ways of

education

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have their own advantages and disadvantages. Online

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appeared relatively recently and already became one of the best ways to study due to its convenience and accessibility for everyone.

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internet-based lectures you need only a few things

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as electronic devices and the internet.,

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you would be able comfortable time and even study everywhere where you want for free.

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, there are several drawbacks of Internet-based lessons

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a tutor so it would be harder to motivate myself,

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laziness is a crucial problem of online

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, universities are one of the best places where you earn knowledge, checked by time and graduation from university guarantee you that you will become a highly skilled specialist while online-based schools could not give you

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grant.going to the lectures at the same time every day would teach

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to you. So to conclude both ways of

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are good ,their disadvantage does not overweight the advantages that they provide.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

flexibility
self-paced learning
cost-effective
commuting
geographical locations
structured learning environment
discipline
face-to-face interactions
networking opportunities
holistic development
on-campus resources
comprehensive educational experience
extracurricular activities

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Some people argue that internet-based lectures is better type of lectures. The other tend to believe that university-based lecture is still needed. Explain both side of the view and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this.

The best/ only way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?