Some people argue that internet-based lectures is better type of lectures. The other tend to believe that university-based lecture is still needed. Explain both side of the view and give your opinion.

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some people that online lectures are the best type of learning,
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others think that traditional university lessons are better.Both ways of
education
have their own advantages and disadvantages. Online
education
appeared relatively recently and already became one of the best ways to study due to its convenience and accessibility for everyone.
To begin
internet-based lectures you need only a few things
such
as electronic devices and the internet.,
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you would be able comfortable time and even study everywhere where you want for free.
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, there are several drawbacks of Internet-based lessons
such
as I will not
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a tutor so it would be harder to motivate myself,
also
laziness is a crucial problem of online
education
.
On the other hand
, universities are one of the best places where you earn knowledge, checked by time and graduation from university guarantee you that you will become a highly skilled specialist while online-based schools could not give you
such
grant.going to the lectures at the same time every day would teach
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to you. So to conclude both ways of
education
are good ,their disadvantage does not overweight the advantages that they provide.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • self-paced learning
  • cost-effective
  • commuting
  • geographical locations
  • structured learning environment
  • discipline
  • face-to-face interactions
  • networking opportunities
  • holistic development
  • on-campus resources
  • comprehensive educational experience
  • extracurricular activities
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