Nowadays getting a job is becoming harder in poor countries leading to a rise in unemployment. Some people believe that pupils should only be allowed to access primary education while others believe that secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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developing countries like India, Pakistan, Nepal, and Bangladesh tend to have 70% of the unskilled population as compared to developed countries like
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Kingdom and
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states most of the population is
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, smart and Intelligent. In my opinion, I agree that every country should encourage their population to have basic
education
.
Firstly
, in a country like
India
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most of the people are uneducated and
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not have the access to basic
education
.
Families
force their
children
to work at an early age to earn money to run their
families
.
For example
, most of the
children
will be seen working as house helps, in factories and in shops.
Secondly
, females living in villages are forced to get married at an early age so that they can only look after their
families
and
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, they do not have the support from their own
families
to explore their interests towards activities like sports,
education
, and
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.
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, due to the advancement in
technology
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most of the world is studying online via
internet
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on phones, laptops, and computers.
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, many online degrees like Udemy,
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have taken over the
education
system where
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children
get
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access to study material and a tutor.
Thus
, making lectures more feasible and accessible.
Moreover
, students learn how to crack the interviews with the help of YouTube resulting in getting a job.
Government
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took several initiatives to help the weaker section of
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society with schemes like mid-day meals and free
education
in government schools so that every kid is capable of being an entrepreneur or
to work
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in a
multi-national
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firm. To Conclude, every child should be allowed to get
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basic
education
, parents should encourage their
children
to explore what he/she likes to build
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career in so that they know what they are best at. Child labour should be banned and fined. More the educated crowd the more the economy will bloom.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy and numeracy skills
  • competitive job market
  • advanced knowledge and skills
  • versatile workforce
  • higher education
  • specialized training
  • economic development
  • skilled workforce
  • foreign investors
  • social outcomes
  • reduced crime rates
  • quality of life
  • informed decisions
  • financial constraints
  • diluting resources
  • government role
  • accessible and equitable education
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