We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology how do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
Many people these days rely more and more
in
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as entertinment
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entertainment
this
dependency on technology
change in the future? and is this
even a good thing for humanitiy
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I will try to answer both of these questions and Add a comma
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technology
is vital for us to advnace
and improve our Correct your spelling
advance
lifes
.
As Correct your spelling
lives
life
technology
improves, I believe we will rely on it more than we ever did before. It will become easier and faster to use
with many features and apilities
. Correct your spelling
abilities
capabilities
For example
, a new company called Nurallink is developing a new technology
to attach a chip to a human brain and using this
chip you can controll
your phone or computer without Correct your spelling
control
touch
it. Wrong verb form
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In addition
. it can send data directly to your brain like images and videos even if your
blind. So Replace the word
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like having a phone directly connected to your head and you can send, Replace the word
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it is
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and search for information by just thinking about it. Correct your spelling
receive
This
is just one example of a
new Correct the article-noun agreement
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technologies
and there are many others that I believe will change how we live in the future in a good way.
While it is true that relying on Fix the agreement mistake
technology
technology
too much can have man
drawbacks, I believe Correct your spelling
many
technology
is and will be an important part of everyone
lives and we will not be able to avoid it. You will have to Change noun form
everyone's
use
technology
even for long periods of time if you want to keep up with everyone
else. For example
, when phones first
came out some people did not like them and they
rarely Correct pronoun usage
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use
them, so they lost touch with what is going on in the world or they were not able to communicate with their families and friends becuase
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because
everyone
and everything is online. All the news and socail
media can be accessed using a phone. so these same people who decided not to Correct your spelling
social
use
a
new Remove the article
apply
technology
were left out. I believe the same thing will happen in the future with new technologies
. So even with the negative things that come with a
new Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
technologies
, you will likely be forced to use
them to be a part of society.
In summary, I think that technolgy
will improve very fast and it will be even Correct your spelling
technology
widely
used than now so we will have to rely on it Correct quantifier usage
more widely
on
almost everything and Change preposition
for
hopfully
improve our Correct your spelling
hopefully
lifes
for the better, and even if don't like these new Correct your spelling
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life
technologies
, if there are usuful
and Correct your spelling
useful
everyone
uses them we will have to adapte
them to keep up.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite