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‘All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

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At the time, most of the
children
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 primary school, They must learn to speak another
language
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. When
children
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 start to study secondary
language
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 at 4-6 ages, they are schooling the best than
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I will explain why First
off
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 all,
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children
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 will learn speech faster, retain it better and most often speak it with native pronunciation. Some researcher shows that
school age
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children
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 ability unconsciously learn
language
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 rules. Even
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, Grown people find a knowledge about international
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language
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who
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 control with full attention can lead to
forgotting
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forgetting
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 them and interference with prior understanding.
This
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 results in a less stable consolidation of the new
language
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 into mature memory.
Nevertheless
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, the
children
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 unconsciously implement the new
language
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 rules and use newly acquired words in their daily
life
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,
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 playing imaginary games or when communicating with peers.
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, they repeat themselves unconsciously with the new information, which benefits long-term memory consolidation.
FHowever
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 have weakness.
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, Foreign
language
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is begun
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training in junior school
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children
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that is
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 they they might confuse their mother
language
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 and speak
mix
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a mix
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between
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 both. Even so, it helps a child develop skills and gain more knowledge which is good for the long run.
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, it is often beneficial considering that it enhances
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smartness and
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 provides ample chances for growth. So. I would like to recommend that It is better to start learning as early as possible
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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