The local council is planning to create ‘dispersal zones’ in certain areas of the city to try to reduce street fighting.what is your opinion?

Nowadays the

goverment

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government

has

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an organization (

Disperal

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Dispersal

Zones) the essence is to reduce the number of

fight

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fights

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in the areas. It works as follows if the police see a group of young

people

in the street, they ask them

separate

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and move. And if

teenager

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a teenager

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is not walking

on

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his area the policeman fines them, but if

this

happens a

second

time

, they will be

arresred

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arrested

for 24 hours. I am against it and I believe that

such

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will only worsen the problem. I think it is not fair, not to allow all teenagers go to out in the evening or at night. Because not all

of

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young

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the young

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people

fight

, there are a lot of

people

who like walking in the evening with their friends,

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to the cinema and just

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their

time

. In my

opinion

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this

is not

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solution to the problem and there are many other options. For

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instance

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the local

concil

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council

should put cameras all over the territory and the police are on duty.

Then

people

will calmly have a good

time

, and the

policemans

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immediately will catch those

people

who

fight

. The other

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for

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this

problem is that necessary to pay attention to hooligans, to those who often

fight

.

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maybe they have problems with their family, with studies or psychological problems.

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they need the help of

psychologist

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or a child custody service. And the

last

option is to organize

the

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activities

that

is

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monitored by the police for teenagers who want to spend

time

with friends or just get some fresh air before

go

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to bed.

People

will have a choice to participate or not

,

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because there are teenagers who like

stay

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at home and watch movies. If they do

this

then

the young

people

will be happy, and others will be calm. In

conclution

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conclusion

, In my

opinion

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the "

Disperal

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Dispersal

Zones" organization is a bit

crual

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cruel

crucial

and not very effective, there are many other ways to have fewer fights on the streets, and

the

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same

time

not to limit anyone.