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The Internet has brought many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we can do things such as mailing, contacting, banking and communication much faster. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In the modern era, the
internet
 has changed the way we connect with our friends and family. It has changed the way we access information and buy things. It has enabled people to work from their homes. In my opinion, the
internet
 has more positive impacts than negative impacts on our lives. To embark on, the
internet
 has made information accessible to everyone. Much of the content on the
internet
 is free. Anyone who has an
internet
 connection can access it from any part of the
world
. Having an
internet
 connection is a bit like having access to all the books in the
world
.For
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, people can now get medical and financial advice online, or students can prepare for their tests online.
in addition
,
internet
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also
 allows us to buy and sell things online from the comfort of our
home
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. Online transactions save time and money. Another advantage of the
internet
 is its ability to facilitate communication. Thanks to technologies
such
 as video conferencing, people living in different parts of the
world
 can now participate in online conferences at the same time.
This
 eliminates the need for them to travel to another country just for the sake of attending a conference. In conclusion,after
this
 essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that the
internet
 has become an indispinciple technology in today's
world
. It has connected the
world
 and made opportunities available to everyone.
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