Some people think children should study at school and other think they should study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that adolescents ought to
study
at
school
. Supporters of the opposite view believe that it will be better for teenagers to
study
at
home
. I concur with supporters of the
first
view for two reasons.
Firstly
, if students
study
at
home
, they will be unable to communicate with each other.
Therefore
, they will spend their breaks playing computer games or something like
this
instead
of having fun with their classmates.
In addition
, they will lose a chance to make new friends from other classes. Obviously, all those things may be provided by a
school
.
For instance
, a social interview confirmed that children want to
study
at
school
more than at
home
due to the fact that it is interesting and funny
Secondly
, the right environment plays a role in effective learning. Admittedly, teenagers will
study
with desire and motivation when they are at
school
because they are surrounded by other students and teachers.
For example
, adolescents from all over the world admitted that during COVID they did not
study
at
home
because they were sleeping at the time of the online lessons. In conclusion,
this
essay supports the idea that studying at
school
has more advantages than studying at
home
because children can communicate with others and
study
productively.
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