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SOME PEOPLE TODAY PREFER TO GET ADVICE FOR MEDICAL PROBLEMS AND DO NOT WANT TO VISIT A DOCTOR WHY IS THIS? IS THIS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

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In the time of 21st century, people do not like to visit doctors due to the long queue of hospitals and trust issues are the main problem, that many of them face in their routine life.
However
, sometimes it is good to cure normal problems and diseases at home with several home remedies.
To begin
 with, in
this
 modern era, humans are always so careful about their health-related issues. Some individuals are always worried about their health and they regularly do their routine check-ups. Whereas, nowadays communities get basic medicine without the need for any prescription.
Also
, in some cases
such
 as vehicle accidents and in other emergency cases doctors are required for fast healing and better improvement for the human body.
On the other hand
, others believe that it is not mandatory to prefer a doctor for normal diseases
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 because some medical problems
such
 as fever, cold and diarrhoea are easily cured at home with the following precautions.
Moreover
, with the use of technology, the public easily gets information about various medicines, which helps the public with a lower cost compared to hospitals.
For example
, at the time of the covid pandemic, there were a number of individuals who followed basic guidelines and were not affected by the coronavirus.
Lastly
, I believe that a doctor's check-up is only necessary
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 when the human body cannot handle the pain. Agglomerating all points above elaborated, I opine that it totally depends on the situation
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 because doctors are more knowledgeable compared to a normal person.
Therefore
, I personally think that somewhere it is a negative development for mankind.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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