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Do you agree that establishing road-tolls is the best solution to the problem of congested roads?

#road-tolls #roads
Congested
roads
 are a Major problem around the world. Nowadays,
People
 believe that the best
way
 is collecting tolls to solve the
traffic
 problem, and I, too, believe it is one of the best ways to do that, and some other ways are
also
 available.
Firstly
, one
way
 to limit the
traffic
 is a tax on using busy
roads
, as money will deduct from their bank account. It will let
people
 change a route if other routes have no tax on using them as most
people
 want to save money.
as a result
, only a limited number of
people
 will use the busy
roads
.
Secondly
, Government should increase public transport and provide a better service. So,
people
 will use the transit service rather than taking their car as it will be cheap and easy to access.
Also
, many commuters will choose
this
 mode to travel, and it will gradually decrease
traffic
 on congested
roads
.
Finally
, the funds should spend on extensions of
roads
, and different lanes, which must construct for every mode of transport, as it will automatically have more space for vehicles it will solve the problem of congested
roads
,
For example
, if cars and trucks are going on the same lane and the truck is slower as it has lots of weight in it,
however
, it will take some time to move on the other side, as well as, it will result in increased in cars behind it. In conclusion, paying tolls is a
way
 to decrease
traffic
, but
also
 there are better ways,
such
 as a better quality of transport and the Extension of
roads
 in a
way
 that will not create problems.
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