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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a jobb straight after shcool. Discuss both views.

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While it is considered by some that getting a
job
 after graduation is the best route to a successful
job
, others argue that studying at university is the best way to do so.
This
 essay will explain both views and my argument with the latter argument.
To begin
 with, some
people
 believe that having a
job
 straight after secondary
school
 as
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they
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 able to save more money from working due to quickly starting a
job
 than others.
This
 is because their opinion about success probably would be having the most money in their entire life.
However
, some opponents claim that it should be continued to study in university or college, and that would be the best successful career path.
This
 is probably because they will earn more
knowledges
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knowledge
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 and connections during their study in college, and they can apply these benefits to their career. Personally, I believe that it should be studying in tertiary education for gaining
their
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knowledge after studying high
school
. In today's ,world many companies solely accept
people
 who are graduates of university or college because those
people
 guaranteed that they have efficient information for organizations. In conclusion,
although
 some
people
 believe that a successful career path is getting a
job
 straight after
school
, I am of opinion that one should be continued to study in tertiary education after graduation from secondary
school
.
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