You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am
student
Add an article
a student
of
Colombo University. I am writing Change preposition
at
this
letter to inform that
improvement of the deficiencies in the cafeteria.
Correct determiner usage
the
However
, I regularly have my lunch at the cafeteria, because over there the food was so delicious and have friendly staff those
who Provide excellent customer service. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, Price
is reasonable and Correct article usage
the Price
variety
of food available. I am extremely satisfied Correct article usage
a variety
some
overall Change preposition
with some
condition
, but there are Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
few
facilities Correct article usage
a few
need
to be updated.
Correct pronoun usage
that need
Firstly
, we have to wait there long
time to purchase our meals, because has only one counter. Add an article
a long
Secondly
, during the
Correct article usage
apply
lunch
Correct your spelling
lunchtime
time
the cafeteria was Add a comma
,time
an
overcrowded and impossible to find a place to sit down. Change the article
apply
Thirdly
there are many fans broken and inside too hot.
Therefore
, I would like to Suggest open
another two counters to Replace the word
opening
selling
food, Wrong verb form
sell
then
we can purchase our meals quickly. Also
I think need Add a comma
,Also
place
Fix the infinitive
to place
some
few tables Correct determiner usage
a
in
the terrace, Change preposition
on
then
we have a
more places to sit down. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Finally
I think Add a comma
,Finally
better
option Add an article
the better
a better
is remove
all the Change the verb form
removes
fan
and Fix the agreement mistake
fans
fixing
Wrong verb form
fix
few
air conditioners.
Yours faithfully,
SamCorrect article usage
a few
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