Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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studies ought to be done and handled by the regime

instead

of non-governmental corporations. I completely disagree with

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view. It is obvious that government is not able to control all research centres around the country in which a hundred universities and science-based companies are conducting research on a variety of different subjects

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because the administration does not have enough employees and resources to manipulate

such

a vast field of study.

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, there are not sufficient ideas to be employed for academic studies.

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, the ministry of Sciences and Technology is not able to define hundreds of thousands of proposals for all the faculties and science centres.

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, it cannot plan for all aspects of science.

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by many that independent businesses are more intelligent in scientific fields since they have thoroughly been studying the market and its demands as well as new technological advances.

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, they know how and where to invest money and time in order to attain the highest profits and achievements. In

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manner, private technology companies are more flexible and cognizant than governmental organizations.

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, schedules and outlines can easily be planned in non-governmental corporations, while they are not restricted by politics and peripheral issues of various media and organizations.

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can be exemplified in the invention of the covid-19 vaccine in a small start-up in Tehran, in which some independent biologists found an effective method for mass production of corona vaccine, as opposed to five governmental pharmaceutical factories that could not make a reliable vaccine while they were funded by the regime. In conclusion, I support the idea that scientific studies should not be controlled by the administration.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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