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Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

#people #internet #information #access #support
In new modern
life
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 the usage of the
internet
 escalated tremendously because it plays an important role in
everyone
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life
.most
of
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the
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people agree with that for
differant
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different
 reasons
however
 less can
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 plentufly of the website
information
 can be a threat
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 their
life
, we will highlight which view is right and the reason of that in the passage. In the beginning, we will list some of the benefits of using the
internet
 in our lives starting with
every
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day's
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 move to work and which transportation I will take so it's easy to find anything on the web badges starting from shopping,reading,studying and searching.
Furthermore
, it's highly recommended for online learning nowadays in case of crises and natural disasters
such
 as the coronavirus pandemic and floods.
Besides
 that we can learn from other cultures and
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lifestyle
form
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 all around the world without being there, it
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plenty of advantages to using
internet
information
 to guide us for the right things.
on the
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 there will be some obstacles to using
this
data
such
 as hacking for your
perssonal
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personal
data
 and gathering personal
information
 .
Moreover
, there will
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 abuse through commercial advertising which is not suitable at all and should be blocked
moreover
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games which contain
violence
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 scenes that
affets
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affects
 on our
children
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life
. In conclusion, I recommend to uses the
information
data
 in our modern
life
 wisely and carefully without disclosure of personal
data
 and getting training for the safe usage of
internet
information
 without exposing ourselves or our families to danger. one more thing it will be highly recommended to teach the children in the schools circular how to use the
internet
information
 in the right way
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