In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In a few nations, Many individuals are dealing with health issues, as they eat lots of fast

food

.

That is

why the

government

needs to impose a higher

tax

on

such

kinds of

food

.

However

, I partially agree with

this

because it is not the only option there are

also

other things that they should do.

Now a days

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,

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fast

food

is available

in

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on

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every

streets

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street

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And it is cheaper

then

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than

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other kind

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another kind

other kinds

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of

foods

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food

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, so a lot number of

peoples

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people

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prefer it.

However

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,However

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if

government

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the government

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is putting

a

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apply

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more

tax

on it as it creates

the

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apply

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health issues for

people

,

may be

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maybe

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a

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apply

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plenty of poor and

middle class

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middle-class

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people

stop eating it, but the rich

people

still will eat it and

also

the children they just do not care about the

tax

.

For example

:

There

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there

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is my cousin’s son who

know

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knows

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how to order

the

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food

online, so he just

order

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orders

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fast

food

from their mobile

and

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apply

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this

is not the one but there are many

people

do

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who do

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that.

Furthermore

, with the

tax

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,tax

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the

government

should

also

start

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social awareness programs on social media, news

channel

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channels

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, and any other platform available, so

the

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that

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people

can familiar with why they are getting health issues, and how they can stop their

childrens

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children

children's

from ordering

such

kind of

food

.

For instance

, if

i

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I

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am not familiar with the problems

i

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I

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will get from fast

food

and

i

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I

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have good earnings

then

i

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I

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will not care about the

tax

but if

i

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I

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get familiar with the consequences

then

may be

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maybe

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i

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I

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stop eating fast

food

, so the

government

should

also

work on

this

thing too. In conclusion, the number of

people

will decrease by increasing the

tax

, but if other things

also

imposed

such

as social awareness programs that will have a great impact,

that is

why I

am partially agree

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with it.