Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. Thy say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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IT HAS BECOME A COMMON NOTICEABLE PROBLEM THAT ENOUGH GARBAGE IS NOT THROUGH FOR RECYCLING IN

WASTE

BINS BY community FROM HOUSES OR CITIES. IN MY VIEW, I THINK THAT PEOPLE NEED TO BECOME MORE RESPONSIBLE THAN THE

GOVERNMENT

. I AM WRITING SOME POINTS IN THE

TWO PARAGRAPH

FIRSTLY

, WASTED THINGS ARE STAYED MORE DAYS IN A HOME BY PEOPLE.BECAUSE

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THEY DO NOT GIVE MORE IMPORTANCE

THAN

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OTHERS HOMES WORK.BUT, IT IS A PROBLEMATIC ISSUE FOR EVERYONE. GARBAGE STAY FOR A LONG TIME IN PLACES , THEY ARE STARTING SMELLING AND

HAS

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MANY CHANCES TO SPREAD DISEASES, INCERESING AIR POLLUTION. ALL WE KNOW VERY WELL IS THAT MALARIA IS SPREAD FROM

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BY MOSQUITOES.

SECONDLY

, PEOPLE NEED TO BECOME MOST AWARE OF THESE JOBS. THEY NEED TO GIVE SUPPORT TO THEIR LOCAL RECYCLING INDUSTRIES .IF THEY ARE GIVING REGULAR HOME

WASTE

, THE PROBLEM WILL BE AUTOMATICALLY SOLVED.

GOVERNMENT

ALSO

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THIS

POINT, IN SOME COUNTRIES, THEY BANNED THE USE OF PLASTIC BAGS. BECAUSE PLASTIC BAGS SPARED A LOT OF POLLUTION AND

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THAN OTHER MATERIALS. WITH REGARD

THIS

TO,

GOVERNMENT

ALSO

NEED TO MAKE A LAW OR SOME FINE FOR IRRESPONSIBLE PERSON IN THE COUNTRIES.

THUS

, THEY HAVE MORE BECOME AWARE OF THAT.

AS A RESULT

, THEY WILL GET SOME FINE OR NOTICE AND THEY BECOME MORE AWARE OF THAT IN CONCLUSION, HUMANS SHOULD NEED TO GIVE MORE PRIORITY RELATED TO

THIS

PROBLEM THAN THE

GOVERNMENT

. IT IS OUR RESPONSIBILITY TO STAY HEALTHY AND CLEAN NOT

GOVERNMENT'S

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GOVERNMENT

CAN ONLY PROVIDE SUPPORT OR SOME FINANCIAL SUPPORT TO US.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

260 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Environmental stewardship
Recycling initiatives
Waste management
Mandatory regulations
Compliance and enforcement
Recyclable materials
Circular economy
Landfill diversion
Conservation
Greenhouse gas emissions
Sanitation services
Public policy
Behavioral change
Eco-consciousness
Resource recovery
Single-stream recycling
Waste hierarchy
Economic incentives
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These days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities?

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.

The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year.

Many people think it is the government’s responsibility to ensure the provision of good health care for everyone in the community and that each individual should be cared for by State medical programmes. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?