Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. Thy say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #government #requirement #laws

IT HAS BECOME A COMMON NOTICEABLE PROBLEM THAT ENOUGH GARBAGE IS NOT THROUGH FOR RECYCLING IN

WASTE

BINS BY community FROM HOUSES OR CITIES. IN MY VIEW, I THINK THAT PEOPLE NEED TO BECOME MORE RESPONSIBLE THAN THE

GOVERNMENT

. I AM WRITING SOME POINTS IN THE

TWO PARAGRAPH

FIRSTLY

, WASTED THINGS ARE STAYED MORE DAYS IN A HOME BY PEOPLE.BECAUSE

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THEY DO NOT GIVE MORE IMPORTANCE

THAN

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OTHERS HOMES WORK.BUT, IT IS A PROBLEMATIC ISSUE FOR EVERYONE. GARBAGE STAY FOR A LONG TIME IN PLACES , THEY ARE STARTING SMELLING AND

HAS

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MANY CHANCES TO SPREAD DISEASES, INCERESING AIR POLLUTION. ALL WE KNOW VERY WELL IS THAT MALARIA IS SPREAD FROM

WASTE

BY MOSQUITOES.

SECONDLY

, PEOPLE NEED TO BECOME MOST AWARE OF THESE JOBS. THEY NEED TO GIVE SUPPORT TO THEIR LOCAL RECYCLING INDUSTRIES .IF THEY ARE GIVING REGULAR HOME

WASTE

, THE PROBLEM WILL BE AUTOMATICALLY SOLVED.

GOVERNMENT

ALSO

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THIS

POINT, IN SOME COUNTRIES, THEY BANNED THE USE OF PLASTIC BAGS. BECAUSE PLASTIC BAGS SPARED A LOT OF POLLUTION AND

WASTE

THAN OTHER MATERIALS. WITH REGARD

THIS

TO,

GOVERNMENT

ALSO

NEED TO MAKE A LAW OR SOME FINE FOR IRRESPONSIBLE PERSON IN THE COUNTRIES.

THUS

, THEY HAVE MORE BECOME AWARE OF THAT.

AS A RESULT

, THEY WILL GET SOME FINE OR NOTICE AND THEY BECOME MORE AWARE OF THAT IN CONCLUSION, HUMANS SHOULD NEED TO GIVE MORE PRIORITY RELATED TO

THIS

PROBLEM THAN THE

GOVERNMENT

. IT IS OUR RESPONSIBILITY TO STAY HEALTHY AND CLEAN NOT

GOVERNMENT'S

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GOVERNMENT

CAN ONLY PROVIDE SUPPORT OR SOME FINANCIAL SUPPORT TO US.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Environmental stewardship
Recycling initiatives
Waste management
Mandatory regulations
Compliance and enforcement
Recyclable materials
Circular economy
Landfill diversion
Conservation
Greenhouse gas emissions
Sanitation services
Public policy
Behavioral change
Eco-consciousness
Resource recovery
Single-stream recycling
Waste hierarchy
Economic incentives
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