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In many countries large amounts of food are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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Today, everything is thriving, especially in the culinary and
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 industries.
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-related problems have become a leading concern in most countries for many years.
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,
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 waste and solutions for reducing it have been controversial. In
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 essay, I will analyze
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 dilemma and give my own opinion.
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 of all, too much
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 is wasted when it is purchased and prepared. It is
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 possible to discard or store partially consumed
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 at the back of the refrigerator. A major factor contributing to
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 complication is consumer behaviour. There is a wide variety of preferences among customers, which affects their purchasing decisions.
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 insights may prevent
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 from purchasing unblemished vegetables and adhering to shelf-life dates that are too restrictive. Despite not being necessary,
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 will choose the most pleasant and cleanest
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 in response to a promotion.
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, the situation can still be resolved. In order to get what they really need,
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 should make and follow a shopping list every day. As a reminder to use older items in the refrigerator and cupboard, humanity can
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 store
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 efficiently by keeping new items in the back. To prevent insects from entering, make sure that packets are tightly closed in airtight containers while preserving open foods in the fridge. In conclusion,
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 should have an awareness of the importance of not wasting and learn how to respect it.
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, government policies regarding
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 consumption and sale must be implemented to prevent
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 from being thrown away.
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