Some students take one year off berween school and university .Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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students

are receive

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a gap

year

during

thier

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their

at

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school or

unversity

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university

year

. It has become

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widespread and cause

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people

arguments . I personally believe that the benefits of the take one

year

far

outwiegh

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outweigh

outweighs

its drawbacks .These benefits are twofold.

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of

all

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it is an

indesputable

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indisputable

fact that

the

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take a gap

year

has revolutionized .

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the majority of

students

take one

year

off between school and

unversity

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university

.During

thier

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their

the

year

they can improve their stress that

reliave

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relieves

it . Because they were fatigued and boring their

study

. After

this

phenomenon may be disappearance their stress.

In addition

that

students

can do other things during

this

year

for example

they should learn new exercises

such

as handicrafts or sports exercises. These are useful

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healthy .

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they can go abroad and earn money .

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this

event

increase

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their

finiancial

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financial

.

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hand

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this

phenomenon has some drawbacks.

Firstly

if

students

take education

a

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gap

year

they will lose all information about their

study

knowledge .

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is bring

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their difficulties that

following

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year

they can not

study

like other

students

. Another reason is their interest

are

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change

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. Cause during

studentʼs

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students

vacations they are busy

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with other

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other exercise

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another exercise

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rather than studying

this

is

reason

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students

lose their interest and they do not want to

study

.

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phenomenon may affect their life . By way of

conclusion

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I once

agian

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again

reaffirm my position that

receive

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receives

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one

year

off between school and university

has

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impact on modern life .I think

this

negative effect

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on studentʼs

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studentʼs

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students

futute

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future

.