Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

It is often assumed that every citizen should contribute

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donating their settled amount of income,

for

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those who need

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financial support. I believe that

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sheer

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the sheer

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cost of living, and uneven financial status

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statement impractical, and I will explain why in

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essay. First of all, well-known obstacles appear to be, the number of middle statuses which make up approximately half of the population, who barely cover their needs.

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, in underdeveloped countries

such

as Mongolia, workers, or small business runners

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to pay high levels of tariffs, which can be considered as

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burden for them. Another important issue is that, as

worldwide

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inflation rate increases, living expenses tend to enhance,

along with

poverty

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rate.

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, it can be quite demanding for citizens, who have low

income

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incomes

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to compensate

from

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their wages.

Lastly

,

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contribution should be voluntary,

therefore

, it should not be compulsory for everybody to make a contribution to charitable organizations. In view of the fact that each individual has their own right to consider whether or not to participate in

charity

.

However

, involving each individual in

charity

support could raise the amount of

charity

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,

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could increase public awareness for those who require assistance towards their economic matters. It is true that there are some positives to

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trend, if

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of

charity

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would include every nation, the

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money would expand as well. Despite

this

,

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aspiration suffers significantly when confronted with financial reality.

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, it appears to be that

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community could not be donated by every person, since their financial matters could be varied.