Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras).In many cases,the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

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increased in the past ten years and most of the information that we have searched for cell phone tracking and security cameras are monitored by search engine companies and governments or anonymous. Many societies do not catch that

this

is happening and most of them are not interested in

this

situation. There are many advantages to monitoring what society is saying and doing.

First,

the government can track the criminal’s cell phones and security cameras so that they can catch them immediately.

Second,

if there are elders in the household, youngers can take a look for elders and

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if there are emergency situations for them. But in my opinion, the pros of the case do not outweigh the cons. Maybe the disadvantages might overwhelm the advantages. tracking personal information should be carried on seriously and many communities should take care of the case and protect their privacy themselves. The number of residents who live in an apartment in Korea is sinking in

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case. Most of the brand-new apartments have a wall pad in their accommodations,

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device includes an HD camera, which allows residents to call neighbourhoods.

However

, many criminals hack

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wall pad and sell the sensitive videos to others. To handle

this

serious problem, we should keep our privacy ourselves.

First,

we can block the camera by using tapes and stickers.

This

is the main solution for blocking criminals

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a camera.

Second,

the community can use high-secured devices, like an iPhone. Apple’s devices have developed security systems so that anonymous hackers cannot hack them. Eventually, because there are bigger cons than pros in

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situation, the community should take care of

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problem and protect their privacy.