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Some people think that students do not respect their teachers as a few decades earlier students used to do. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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A part of society stands on the idea that pupils have less respect for their teachers,
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 an opposing view opines
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 belief is disregarded. I generally believe that
students
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 nowadays have a lower amount of respect towards their lecturers. Foremost, with newer ways being introduced to mentoring pupils, they feel less dependent on their tutors,
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 is especially magnified in general topics
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 as history and geography, where the information can be found on web pages through a few clicks.
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 opens an empty void in
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' minds and makes
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 distinguish the knowledge of their masters' from a few mere web pages.to explain more, questions for the final exams nowadays have a wider range on the Internet,
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, the teachers of said subjects,
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 number of reasons are limited to a few question sets. Another point to be taken into account is the fact of a generation gap. In my perspective, children born in the 2000s,
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 Generation Z, are simply more rebellious, their mindsets seem to of an absolute difference from their tutors, which by the way, were mostly born before the year 2000.
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 difference in ideology causes hardship in creating rapport,
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 the chemistry established by a tutor in order to make a class fruitful.
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 my perspective, the lower the age gap, the higher
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 of reaching mutual grounds and opinions with the
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.
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,
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, it seems for
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, in
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 day and age, being just a teacher, does not bring respect as it used to in the past, but it is the effort done by the lecturer to understand them
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