One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/ her family in their home. Write a letter to your friend Thank him and tell them what you have enjoyed the most How do you feel about his/her family Suggest him/her to visit you

#friends #home #friend #visit

Dear Nancy, How are you? I am really pleased with the heart-warming dinner party we had in your home. I really enjoyed it and had a lot to share since our

last

meeting. I really appreciate

you

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for

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the efforts that you've made to make me feel

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home experience. The best part was that your mom made home-cooked dishes which were even more delicious than restaurant-style foods. She's

such

an amazing person that I've ever met. It was

such

an enjoyable experience when I got introduced to your grandparents, siblings and parents. Your

grandmas

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old stories were so adventurous about their past life. I had a great time

while

playing with your kitty. I would like to invite you for a sleepover party at our house. Let's plan it for the next weekend. Let me know if you're free to discuss

this

plan. Again, I am really keen to see you again. Take care, Kiran

Submitted by Kiran on Fri May 31 2024

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for clarity.

task achievement

Try to expand on your feelings about the family with specific examples.

task achievement

You have included all required points, such as thanking, explaining what you enjoyed, describing your feelings about the family, and inviting them to visit you.

task achievement

Your tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter flows logically from thanking to explaining the experience and finally inviting your friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

156 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/ her family in their home. Write a letter to your friend Thank him and tell them what you have enjoyed the most How do you feel about his/her family Suggest him/her to visit you

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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