overpopulation is the worlds most serious enviromental problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?
For the time being,
remorsefully
growth in Change the word
remorseful
population
has caused us to confront crucial environmental issues.Although
some people disagree with this
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the most
crowd
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crowds
this
statement as a threat and I take side
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sides
this
subject.
First
of all, the lack of natural resources has to be considered as an insurmountable problem and obviouslly
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obviously
population
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the population
government
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the government
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requirements
requirement
public
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the public
such
as food or educational facilities.Regretfully recently,the majority of countries have been involved in various economical problems thus
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fundamental
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society
Furthermore
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such
as water has always been declining during recent years.panel of sociologist
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sociologists
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to
human
community.
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the human
On the other hand
,regardless of these issues which have been meantioned
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apply
also
they will cosume
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consume
resursess
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resources
as a result
this
phenomenon will cause deforestation and extinction
of scarce animals.Correct article usage
the extinction
Although
some nations such
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the Europian
Europian
ones have been needed to encourage their people to Correct your spelling
European
further
the
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their
population
,the earth does not have sufficient capacity to tolarate
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tolerate
exsesive
growth in Correct your spelling
excessive
number
of people.
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the number
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changed
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a subestantial
subestantial
issue for international communities since lawmakers are not able to provide facilities for the folks.Correct your spelling
substantial
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resources
logical
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logically
community
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the community
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