overpopulation is the worlds most serious enviromental problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?

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growth in

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has caused us to confront crucial environmental issues.

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with them. In the ensuing ,paragraphs I will delve into

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of all, the lack of natural resources has to be considered as an insurmountable problem and

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increases dramatically,

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have to provide urgent

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as food or educational facilities.Regretfully recently,the majority of countries have been involved in various economical problems

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,it can hardly be said that they will be able to overcome all things which are

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as water has always been declining during recent years.panel of

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oxford university have declared that war for water is an inevitable threat

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community.

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,regardless of these issues which have been

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they will

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resources

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phenomenon will cause deforestation and

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of scarce animals.

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some nations

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ones have been needed to encourage their people to

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population

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,the earth does not have sufficient capacity to

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of people. In conclusion, I am inclined to believe

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recently, overpopulation has been

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issue for international communities since lawmakers are not able to provide facilities for the folks.

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, the planet is satiated by

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and shortage of

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resources

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to expand

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

264 words

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