overpopulation is the worlds most serious enviromental problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?

For the time being,
remorsefully
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growth in
population
has caused us to confront crucial environmental issues.
Although
some people disagree with
this
notion ,
most
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crowd
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have concurred with
this
statement as a threat and I take
side
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with them. In the ensuing ,paragraphs I will delve into
this
subject.
First
of all, the lack of natural resources has to be considered as an insurmountable problem and
obviouslly
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obviously
,when
population
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increases dramatically,
government
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have to provide urgent
requirmetns
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requirements
requirement
for
public
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the public
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such
as food or educational facilities.Regretfully recently,the majority of countries have been involved in various economical problems
thus
,it can hardly be said that they will be able to overcome all things which are
foundomental
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fundamental
for growing a
socieaty
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society
.
Furthermore
,as it is
meantioned
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mentioned
,the
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blessing
such
as water has always been declining during recent years.panel of
sociologist
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of
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oxford university have declared that war for water is an inevitable threat
for
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human
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community.
On the other hand
,regardless of these issues which have been
meantioned
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mentioned
not only are not governments able to
fulfill
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all demands
,
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but
also
they will
cosume
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consume
all
resursess
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resources
.
as a result
this
phenomenon will cause deforestation and
extinction
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of scarce animals.
Although
some nations
such
as
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the Europian
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Europian
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European
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ones have been needed to encourage their people to
further
the
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population
,the earth does not have sufficient capacity to
tolarate
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tolerate
exsesive
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excessive
growth in
number
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a number
the number
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of people. In conclusion, I am inclined to believe
taht
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that
recently, overpopulation has been
cahnged
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changed
to
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a subestantial
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subestantial
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substantial
issue for international communities since lawmakers are not able to provide facilities for the folks.
However
, the planet is satiated by
population
and shortage of
resurces
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resources
on
logical
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to expand
community
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the community
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.
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