People are buying more second-hand products nowadays.why is this? Is it a positive development or a negative ?

Nowadays in a number of countries,buying utilized goods have been rising.from my point of view,
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issue has been driven by financial matters.throughout
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I will shed some light on the aforementioned matter and examine the positive effects of
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issue,which I think outweigh the negatives. Nowadays numerous countries are struggling with financial problems;
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of pursuing power these countries are facing significant decline.and ,
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these problems have created conditions that a part of society turn to
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used goods.
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in Iran ,due to the sanctions , the national currency has lost much of its value and
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led to purchasing power falling dramatically., especially in terms of imported
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.the proof of
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claim is the sharp increase in the rate of transactions in junk shops.
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issue can be assessed from an economic and environmental point of view.economic experts believe that increasing the purchase of used goods leads to an upward trend in the unemployment rate because it reduces production.but
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, environmental experts are of the opinion that using
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is one of the practical solutions for reaching to a greener world.because buy a decrease in demand for new
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lead to fewer demands for energy and raw materials in the area of production.
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it causes a reduction in the production of industrial waste. In a way of conclusion, using utilized
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has many economical disadvantages and environmental advantages .and for a person like me who always has been an environmentally conscious person, the environmental advantages outweigh the economical disadvantages.

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