You have recently moved into new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the noise which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - Introduce yourself - invite your neighbour - describe the planning of the party and express your concern

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Dear Mr Smith, Recently, I moved into your street and was looking forward to having a gathering of friends and family at my place.

Therefore

, I am expecting about 15 to 20 people to attend provided that I have been planning to throw

this

party for a long time now and moving into the city has been a very exciting occasion for all of us. I would deeply appreciate it if you could

also

take out the time and join me and my family in our celebration as nothing would make us happier than for you to become a part of our moments of joy. The schedule for the gathering spans between 6:00 pm and 09:00 pm even though I am expecting the guests to show up about an hour late due to their busy routines.

In addition

although

we have a bunch of activities planned for the attendees including dinner and tea, one thing to which I wanted to bring your attention is the presence of music at the event.

Moreover

, I do realise that

this

might cause some noise later in the evening for which I wanted to apologise in advance. I promise to keep it low

however

I do appreciate your understanding. Thank you. Looking forward to meeting you in person. Sincerely, Fahad

Submitted by sh.fahadashraf on Mon Dec 26 2022

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