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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do vou agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days,
as a result
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 of migration or scholarships provided by universities, many
people
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 are moving to other nations while they do not know their languages.
This
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 trend has caused some to be worried about social and practical problems.
To begin
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 with, learning other countries' native languages may not be the
first
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 task someone wants to do as nearly anyone who decides to leave their homeland knows English same as the public in other nations.
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, as both communities know a language which they can communicate with they can do their typical stuff
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 as shopping and even studying. As an illustration, in Turkey,
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 their mother ,tongue the majority of them are able to have conversations with tourists, and foreign
people
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 due to knowing English.
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, unfortunately, in some nations and even cities especially,
third
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 world counties some may act racist and rude to
people
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 who do not know their way of speaking.
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, it can causes issues as they do not welcome them and even make them struggle with their daily needs like buying food from a restaurant.
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, in Iran, there are few
people
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 who avoid having conversations with the ones who do not talk in Turkish.
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, on some occasions, even basic things can be difficult as we cannot understand foreign languages which
causes
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people
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 to suffer from mental issues as they cannot do entertaining stuff in their leisure time or even some may find it hard to socialize as they do not know the common cultural things or what other communities find interesting.To exemplify, as we can see on different shows, every country has its own way of speaking and even jokes related to its culture. In conclusion, I consider,
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 belief that not knowing some nation's
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 language can cause some serious harm as it may be hard to communicate with others or do daily routine stuff.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • language barrier
  • social isolation
  • cultural integration
  • employment opportunities
  • essential services
  • misunderstandings
  • community support
  • underemployment
  • communication skills
  • marginalization
  • cultural exchange
  • legal systems
  • educational opportunities
  • practical challenges
  • diverse community
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