Nowadays, many familiar have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think child care centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years working parents have had to devote the most time to working. In
this
regard, some debates are held about whether relatives like grandparents should look after
children
or child
care
centres
. I side with those parents who think childcare institutions are a better place for
children
to spend time in which I will discuss both views in detail as follows: child
care
institutions are beneficial to
children
since I am of the opinion that these places provide an environment in which
children
can communicate with their peers;
therefore
, their social interaction
such
as making friends and playing in groups will be improved and it is more likely to become self-confident, independent, and successful people in future.
Besides
, in
such
centres
children
have access to educational and recreational facilities that make them not only develop their potential talent but
also
enjoy their time. As an example, many of them learn how to write or read or even learn a new language.
Conversely
, many believe that family members are more reliable to watch
children
since they are more meticulous about
children
. Being the number of
children
in
such
centres
, nurses can not be vigilant enough. To illustrate, nurses might not pay attention to
children
's healthy diets which adversely affects their growth.
In addition
,
children
who are taken
care
of by childcare
centres
are in danger of getting physically or verbally harmed by their peers.
However
, there are many difficulties in
this
kind of taking
care
. In some ways, family members are not able to entertain
children
due to their physical disability or low tolerance so
children
have to play on their own which might lead to their isolation. In conclusion, childcare
centres
are more suitable for
children
in comparison to being taken
care
of by relatives. The reason for
this
is that
this
condition results in the extension of social skills, confidence and prosperity in future.
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