You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr John, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the unsatisfactory condition of the dining
table
. My name is Arsalan Farooq and I moved to London in 2020 to pursue my Engineering Degree since
then
I have been residing in your apartment with my family. Everything was going fine during the whole period.
However
, the dining
table
has got some problems
last
month. What I have noticed is that its polish is getting faded and the top glass has got a huge crack right in the middle which seems to be hazardous and broken anytime.
Moreover
, the foams of the cushions are damaged and fully pressed.
Also
, their covers are getting torn from the corners.
Therefore
, you are requested to replace the glass of the
table
to avoid any mishap.
Also
, the
table
needs to be painted and the seat cushions should be replaced with new ones. I look forward to receiving a positive response from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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