You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the unsatisfactory condition of the dining

table

. My name is Arsalan Farooq and I moved to London in 2020 to pursue my Engineering Degree since

then

I have been residing in your apartment with my family. Everything was going fine during the whole period.

However

, the dining

table

has got some problems

last

month. What I have noticed is that its polish is getting faded and the top glass has got a huge crack right in the middle which seems to be hazardous and broken anytime.

Moreover

, the foams of the cushions are damaged and fully pressed.

Also

, their covers are getting torn from the corners.

Therefore

, you are requested to replace the glass of the

table

to avoid any mishap.

Also

, the

table

needs to be painted and the seat cushions should be replaced with new ones. I look forward to receiving a positive response from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Mon Dec 26 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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