The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Elderly people tend to have old-fashioned ideas about how other individuals live.
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concept can not help them especially, young people in modern life. I agree with Linking Words
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statement and I will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, some communities think that an old person Linking Words
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as our grandmother or grandfather can give us the best pieces of advice. Linking Words
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, they can teach us how to live or behave with others. Because of, their experiences they know everything better than us. Linking Words
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, we can not behave like old individuals. We must update our knowledge and find a way how we can deal with Linking Words
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issue as modern people.
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On the other hand
, the population's awareness was boosted during Linking Words
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period by social media, learning at schools or other ways. Actually, they can decide for themselves how to live. If they got in trouble they would ask a therapist to treat them. Nowadays, having a psychologist is a good solution to cope with our problems. In fact, they have been studied to aid society and teach them how they can solve any trouble. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a psychologist is aware of today's situations so they will perceive us perfectly.
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To sum up
, after analyzing both sides of the argument, I would say that, an old person can not be a good guide in every situation. We definitely need a therapist to tell us how to figure our problems out.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
The essay demonstrates some logical flow and organization of ideas but lacks a clear link between the introduction and the body paragraphs. It also needs more development of ideas within paragraphs to ensure coherence and cohesion.
task response
The essay partially addresses the prompt by presenting arguments for and against the traditional ideas of the older generation. However, the response lacks depth and needs to provide a balanced evaluation of both viewpoints, supported with relevant examples.