You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to study • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Officer, I am a student in 3rd-year dentistry and my exams are due in

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week. I am writing

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letter to let you know about my problems regarding the room I am staying in at your college. After my admission to the college, I was allotted a room in

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hostel which I share with a student from another department. My roommate has a different schedule for studying

as a result

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it becomes very difficult for me to concentrate on my studies.

Secondly

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, He is fond of music and most of the time listens to different songs which makes the environment very noisy and unsuitable for studying. I need a single room in a silent location with an attached washroom so that I can save precious time for my study. I was wondering if you could pay heed to

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issue as soon as possible. Your prompt response will be awaited. Your's Sincerely, Muhammad Irfan.

drsanaghaniMon Dec 26 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

157 words

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