In the modern era, technology has become an essential part of everyday life. However, while it is often argued that technology such as the Internet and cellphone has beneficial effects on our relationship, it also has a number of drawbacks in human interaction. This essay will analyze the positive aspects and drawbacks of this issue.
these days
technology
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is considerd
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as one of the most important things in our life. and the way Correct your spelling
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of
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people
communicate has changed. So, some Use synonyms
people
think that Use synonyms
technology
has a lot of benefits, while others believe that Use synonyms
technology
has a bad effect on Use synonyms
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essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
On one hand, we have Linking Words
people
who think that we should not use phones or laptops to contact. Use synonyms
For example
, when you want to meet a friend usually you go to a cafe but now a video call is enough. It is not good for our mental health. So, that's why Linking Words
this
way of living is not something that our families are used to and they were not raised to Linking Words
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children are spending most of the day playing Linking Words
different
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a different
kind
of online games; it has a side effect on their body
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On the other hand
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people
who support the idea that Use synonyms
technology
is useful are more than those who do not. It is clear from what we can see that Use synonyms
people
are allowed to do anything on the internet. Use synonyms
such
as, studying, selling, and working. Linking Words
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instance
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can talk to her every day because of the Change the capitalization
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technology
in conclusion, after a careful analysis of both Use synonyms
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one of the greatest things that human beings have made is the internet and the mobile phone.Remove the comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite